Preliminary exercise feedback and LR
Feedback given by Sir: WWW: good opening- shot/reverse shot use of costumes dialogue shot well match on action- good editing going up the stairs good concept use of stereotypes EBI: performance- more emotional music- to add emotion shifting- more realistic Feedback given by Students: WWW: good concept good use of makeup location was well suited to concept good use of props enigma codes were created good audio (dialogue) nice use of match on action shot a range of different types of shots were used good cinematography EBI: could have used music to add emotion performance could be better Reflection: WWW: I think my concept was well thought out and worked as a coming of age drama Mise-en-scene was good because of the make up and location I think my opening had a good timing- the use of shot reverse shot EBI: if the performance was much better and realistic...